My hobby

Cheohwa Hong
EAP1 B WW
July 4th, 2007
In-class 1
My hobbies
When I was child, my mother had passion about teach to me everything. So, I learned many things such as play the violin, draw the picture, take a picture, collect something, swimming, play the golf or tennis, etc. I want to introduce some of my hobbies. At first, one of my favorite hobby is collect stamps. When I was in elementary school, I was interested in stamps. It was easy to get a good stamps because my father hobby was also collect stamps. Next, when I was in middle school student, my favorite hobby was playing the violin. My mother wants to me that I become violinist. However I did not like to play violin. When I quit my violin lessons, I want to learn more how to play violin but I did not want to be professional player. My recently favorite hobby is watching movies. So, I want to talk about my recently hobby next paragraph.
Recently, I am interested in watching movies or dramas. Especially, I like to see America movies or dramas. I want to talk about that why I like to see the American movies or dramas. At first, when I was arrived the America in Virginia, I did not have car. So, I did not go any places. I was in my home whole day so I just watched TV. If TV has my hometown channel, I must be watched that channel. However TV had not my hometown’s channel. This is my first reason. Secondly, I want to improve my English skills. I did not heard whole word yet, but I am trying to listen whole word. It is very helpful to me. So, I continue try to watching it. Last reason is America movie has huge scales, and I also see the familiar places that I visited. In conclusion, I want to have more hobbies. It must be helpful and useful to my life.

Pratice body paragraph by Chad

Cheolhwa Hong
EAP1B WW
JULY/06th/07
Practice body paragraph

Travel
Travel to other country can be exciting, but it has also concerns. So, you must prepare some of factors to enjoy your traveling. At first, you have to know about your visit places’ customs. If you don’t know that, you may be makes a mistake. Secondly, you had better to learn some of theirs language. When you just talk like “Hello”, you can be friendlier to them. So, you are able to feel more comfortable. Third, you had better make sure your travel route. It is better than unplanned because if you carry out as planned, you must be make fantastic travel in your life. So, if you have concerned about your travel, better late than unplanned.